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DO YOU FEEL
Stuck rewriting your opening line for the ninth time, still not sure it earns the second one?
Lost on how to establish POV and voice without burying page one in backstory?
Blocked when you try to introduce your main character—so they land as a real person, not a checklist of traits?
Little to no confidence that your first fifty pages will make an agent (or reader) keep turning?
What You’re Getting
The Foundations Guide is a 173-prompt craft resource covering the fundamentals every fiction writer needs to nail their first fifty pages.
It's built around three make-or-break skills:
Opening Lines & Chapter Hooks. (51 prompts)
Grab readers from sentence once and keep them turning pages. You'll learn how to craft:
First Sentences
First Paragraphs
First Pages
Chapter Endings
Scene transitions
Each technique will help you keep your momentum from leaking out between beats.
POV & Voice Establishment. (53 prompts)
Lock into a perspective and build a narrative voice that's distinctly yours (well… your character's). You'll move through:
Choosing Your POV
Establishing POV Consistency
Narrative Voice Development
Tense Mastery
Distinctive Voice vs. Readable Prose
Character Introduction & Setup. (69 prompts)
Make readers care about your people before they even know the full story. We're crafting:
Protagonist Introduction
Secondary Character Introduction
Character Type Introductions (villains, love interests, mentors, creatures & more)
Character Goals, Wants & Needs
Character Competence & Vulnerability
Character Voice in Dialogue
And because I'm not here to hand you homework you'll never finish, every sentence comes tagged with a time estimate:
⚡5 minutes. A quick hit for stolen moments (microwave's running, meeting's about to start)
⏱️15 minutes. The sweet spot: read it, study it, do it.
🔧30 minutes or more. The deep dives, for when you've got real time to sink in.
No prompt takes over your whole day. Show up, do a set, get a little sharper.
Your opening pages decide whether readers keep going or walk away.LAND YOUR STORY
174 prompts to make your first fifty pages impossible to put down
The Foundations Guide is for the fiction writer who wants their opening pages to hook readers and not let go.
It sharpens the three things that make or break a first impression: openings that pull readers in, a POV and voice that hold them there, and characters they actually care about. Each of those three pillars breaks into focused subsections—so instead of vague advice like “write a strong hook,” you get targeted prompts for specific techniques, one skill at a time.
It’s a downloadable PDF, yours to keep—work in it digitally or print the pages you want to write on. Come back to it for every manuscript you write, not just this one.
No more staring at page one wondering why it’s not landing. With these prompts, you’ll know exactly what to fix and how.
PS: This one’s been combed over and beta-tested by real working writers before it ever reached you. It’s a working tool, not a shelf decoration.
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(Notebook required. Perfectionism not.)What Authors Have To Say
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What Authors Have To Say 〰️
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Teresa Johnson (Fantasy Author)
“Navigating the clear sections and topics is effortless.
Laura Pu-Syska gently demonstrates writing pitfalls by peppering in anecdotes and then puts the solutions into practice by offering prompts to try.
Reading this writing guide is like having a funny friend show you how to take your writing to another level.”
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Annette Turner (Fantasy Author)
“This is the information I’ve been looking for for years. I know there are other books/guides like this out there, but most of those look quite dense if I’m being honest, and that's kind of off-putting.
True to your style of sharing information, these prompts and lessons are bite-sized.”
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Rachael Phillips (Fantasy Author)
“These prompts helped me dive into the scene in a way I hadn’t taken the time to do before. It was so fun to see my own scenes come to life in such a rich, new way! The level of care, specific detail, and true help that you've poured into this guide is absolutely beautiful
I will be using this as a reference often, especially when I get stuck and need a shot of life breathed back into my work!”
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Ava Bragg (Romance Author)
“The Foundations Guide made me look at my writing from a different perspective. I love how it not only gave me a technique to use but also showed me examples and common pitfalls to see it in action.”
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Nope—the craft here works across genres. The examples pull from a range of styles so you can see the technique in action wherever your story lives. (Genre-specific supplements are in the works if you want to go deeper later!)
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Fiction writers working on (or about to start) a manuscript who want their opening pages to actually hook readers. Whether you're on your first draft or your fifth, if your first fifty pages are where things wobble, this is built for you.
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Not at all! The prompts meet you where you are—they're structured (The Technique → See It In Action → Try This Now → Common Pitfall) so you're never staring at a blank page wondering what to do. If you can write a sentence, you can use this.
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Because this is a digital product you download and keep, all sales are final. I want you to buy with confidence, so if you’re unsure whether it’s the right fit, check out the “Who is this for?” section above—or just email me first, and I’ll give it to you straight.
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